Feedback On Rough Cut!

S2 47 Texas - Tell me the answer


Positive Feedback

S2 46: Good effects of the camera flashing and good lip syncing
S2 45: Good camera angle from the beginning
S2 44: Love the paparazzi shot! Attractive Female Leads
S2 43: Good start shot looked right and Good lip syncing
S2 48: Paparazzi shots look cool. Good, Confident lip syncing and performances

Room for Improvement

S2 46: Maybe have a bit more of a storyline and less of lip syncing so it makes more sense
S2 45: Small camera flaw with hand appearing at side of one of the shots
S2 44: Some shots are a little too long
S2 43: More shots needed
S2 48: Two shots were Mel is laughing and smiling changes the mood of the video to a more lighthearted.

Feedback from Nick: Need to shot some more in the dark room