Ideas from feedback

From our feedback from the class we have realised that we need to make some changes to our location shots in order to make the storyline a little bit clearer this will also add more interest into the music video as at the moment there is a lot of mel in the white room lip syncing to the camera.

Therefore we have decided to film in the dark room like we did the white room but his time have some lights maybe different colours to add some interest and vary the shots a bit more. We are also going to film some more to add in but we are going to film around Cambridge as a lot of our filming is inside and we would like to vary our filming. This is when we will be filming the news reader again as it was very windy the say we tried to film it. We will also be filming the billboard with the second fan in front as we have lost the shots of Rosie ripping up the tickets. So we are now going to film her bit in front of the billboard realising that the tour has been canceled. We are also going to add to the footage and Film Mel around Cambridge but in more discreet locations other than grand arcade and obvious places like that therefore we will be filming down the little cobble streets with boutique shops on them. We will also include Mel trying on expensive clothing and been watched and followed by paparazzi. This will then add interest to the video.

The filming of the dark room will be done in Thursday's media lesson and the filming around Cambridge will be done in Friday's lesson.